Comments on: The Last Trick http://www.yellow-llama.com/the-last-trick/ Thu, 08 Dec 2011 07:16:51 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Karen http://www.yellow-llama.com/the-last-trick/comment-page-1/#comment-451 Karen Wed, 12 Oct 2005 15:11:46 +0000 http://www.yellow-llama.com/?p=100#comment-451 Thanx... P.S. Typo....it's supposed to be "Will blood trickle from your ears from the harsh vibrations of the whispers?"...not "hard vibrations"...too much novacaine this morning!!! Thanx…
P.S. Typo….it’s supposed to be “Will blood trickle from your ears from the harsh vibrations of the whispers?”…not “hard vibrations”…too much novacaine this morning!!!

]]> By: Philip http://www.yellow-llama.com/the-last-trick/comment-page-1/#comment-449 Philip Wed, 12 Oct 2005 10:08:27 +0000 http://www.yellow-llama.com/?p=100#comment-449 I really like this one...Will it hurt to love? nice imagery - simple words with so much behind them... ace! I really like this one…Will it hurt to love? nice imagery – simple words with so much behind them… ace!

]]> By: Karen http://www.yellow-llama.com/the-last-trick/comment-page-1/#comment-447 Karen Wed, 12 Oct 2005 08:20:51 +0000 http://www.yellow-llama.com/?p=100#comment-447 Will it hurt to love? What workings of your mind will perish? Will the kiss graze your cheek? Will it hurt to love? The stream that has dammed up, gush out and destroy your foliage? Will nails tear deep ravines into your skin? Will blood trickle from your ears from the hard vibrations of the whispers? Will it hurt to love? Will it hurt to love?

What workings of your mind will perish?

Will the kiss graze your cheek?
Will it hurt to love?

The stream that has dammed up,
gush out and destroy your foliage?

Will nails tear deep ravines into your skin?

Will blood trickle from your ears
from the hard vibrations of the whispers?

Will it hurt to love?

]]> By: Karen http://www.yellow-llama.com/the-last-trick/comment-page-1/#comment-446 Karen Wed, 12 Oct 2005 08:20:20 +0000 http://www.yellow-llama.com/?p=100#comment-446 Realisation! A blazen emotion Surges through the heart Transformation Rising from the core of hatred An emotion dormant, Awakens Like a tornado, tearing through Organisation Causing confusion The eye of the storm! Lasting only seconds. It comes back with power far surpassing any other. Realisation! Realisation!

A blazen emotion
Surges through the heart
Transformation
Rising from the core of hatred
An emotion dormant,
Awakens

Like a tornado, tearing through
Organisation
Causing confusion

The eye of the storm!
Lasting only seconds.
It comes back with power
far surpassing any other.
Realisation!

]]> By: Karen http://www.yellow-llama.com/the-last-trick/comment-page-1/#comment-445 Karen Wed, 12 Oct 2005 08:18:02 +0000 http://www.yellow-llama.com/?p=100#comment-445 Closer Her face glistened in the sun. Her heart that was far removed from her ...returned. Then he tore it out of her outstretched arms. The cavity in her chest still feels the heartbeat. Craves the heartbeat. His eyes, bearing into her soul, burning her soul. Seeing every thought and memory. Not aware of the power he holds, but withholding. She drifts afloat on the turquoise sea. And once again feels the sun, and basks in it. Imagining his strength, his closeness. The two heartbeats destined for oneness. Closer

Her face glistened in the sun.
Her heart that was far removed from her
…returned.

Then he tore it out of her outstretched arms.
The cavity in her chest still feels the heartbeat.
Craves the heartbeat.

His eyes,
bearing into her soul, burning her soul.
Seeing every thought and memory.
Not aware of the power he holds,
but withholding.

She drifts afloat on the turquoise sea.
And once again feels the sun, and basks in it.

Imagining
his strength, his closeness.

The two heartbeats
destined for oneness.

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